My last summer holidays

palaMY LAST SUMMER HOLIDAYS

Hello I'm jordi. I'm 14 and today I'm talking about my last summer holidays.

- First of all I went to England.

- Then I went to Hamburg.

- Finally I prepared for school.

First of all I went to England. I stay in Princess Helena College, with Pol and Bernat. In the first day we were very shy. There we improved a lot our English and we played a lot of different sports like: Tennis, football, basketball, volleyball... We met new people and we had a lot of fun. It was fantastic! 

Then I went to Hamburg, in there I saw the cruises festivals in the night. I visited the biggest musum of models in the world. The last day in Hamburg I had a Cruise on the Elba River.

OBSERVATION OF MY ORAL PRESENTATIONS

Did you use any resources? Yes, I use a power point, with some images.
 Were the resources relevant and attractive? Yes because the power point I help me.

BODY LANGUAGE AND EYE CONTACT

- Did you look at your audience most of the time? Yes, I look the audicence all the time

- Did you read from your notes? I don't read.

- Did you do any gestures/movement to hold the attention of your audience? No, I don't

STRUCTURE

- Did you organize your ideas in order of importance? Yes, I did 

- Did you use discourse markers to to make your ideas more clear? No, I didn't use any markers.

-Did you introduce interesting NEW information to your audience? Yes,  I introduce new information of Berlin.

- Did you look up information/facts/ideas in the internet, books..? No, I didn't

was your information more superficial or more detailed, and original? More superficial

LANGUAGE

- Did you check your grammar? Yes I check my grammar.

- Did you use rich vocabulary looking up the dictionary? I look at de dictionary.

- Did you use sentence linkers? No i didn't use that.

- Did you use  fillers? Yes I use.

PRONUNCIATION AND INTONATION

- Did you know how to pronounce all your words? Yes I know 

- Did you check the pronunciation with a dictionary, a classmate or the teacher? No I didn't check

- Did you change your tone of voice or use a monotone tone all the time? No, I didn't change my voice

-Did you speed in a fluid continuum or with breaks and interruptions? I think with a fluid continuum.

My final mark is: 7

The class presentations

Laia - Went to riding by horse, later she went to C.A.V.A finally she went to Santa Cristina
Marta O- She went to Italy, later she went to England and finally she went to Tossa de Mar
Blanca- Fist she went to 
, later she went to Peru ans finally she went to USA
Mireia F- First she went to Albera, later she went to Estartit finally she return to Banyoles
Jordi- First he went to England, later he went to Hamburg and finally he prepare for school 
Bernat D-  First he went to Can Toni, later he went to England and finally he return to Bnayoles and he went to Platja D'aro
Mònica- First she went to Bermemouth, later she went to a Campstatje and finally she went to l'escala
Marta-First she went to Valencia, later she ment to Roses and finally she return to Banyoles
Núria- Fist she went to Platja D'aro, later she went to Zaragoza and finally she went to Vitoria
Mireia N- First she went to Engalnd, later she went to Platja D'aro
Pau- Firts he went to Plymouth, later he went to Platja d'aro and finally he went to a football camp
Elena- First she went to England, later she went to St.Petersburg
Carlota- First she went to Turkey, later she went to Cadaques.
Esther- First she went to Camping, later she went to Albera and finally she went to Granada